diff --git a/www/_blog/2021-12-03-pg-graphql.mdx b/www/_blog/2021-12-03-pg-graphql.mdx
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@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@ By our most conservative estimate, that reduces the platform's memory requiremen
 
 As a native PostgreSQL extension, `pg_graphl` is written in a combination of C and SQL. Each GraphQL query is parsed, validated, and transpiled to SQL, all within the database.
 
-Each GraphQL request is resolved by a single SQL statement. That SQL statement aggregates requested data as a JSON document to return to the caller. This approach results blazing fast response times, avoids the [N+1 query problem](https://medium.com/the-marcy-lab-school/what-is-the-n-1-problem-in-graphql-dd4921cb3c1a), and hits the theoretical minimum achievable network IO of any GraphQL to SQL resolver. No special permissions are required for the PostgreSQL role executing queries so `pg_graphql` is fully compatible with your existing [row level security policies](/docs/guides/auth/row-level-security).
+Each GraphQL request is resolved by a single SQL statement. That SQL statement aggregates requested data as a JSON document to return to the caller. This approach results in blazing fast response times, avoids the [N+1 query problem](https://medium.com/the-marcy-lab-school/what-is-the-n-1-problem-in-graphql-dd4921cb3c1a), and hits the theoretical minimum achievable network IO overhead of any GraphQL to SQL resolver. No special permissions are required for the PostgreSQL role executing queries, so `pg_graphql` is fully compatible with your existing [row level security policies](/docs/guides/auth/row-level-security).
 
-Embedding the GraphQL server directly in the database enables us leverage PostgreSQL's built-in solutions for common challenges:
+Embedding the GraphQL server directly in the database allows us to leverage PostgreSQL's built-in solutions for common challenges:
 
 Caching → `PREPARE STATEMENT`
 
@@ -196,4 +196,4 @@ Full steps to reproduce this output are available in [the docs](https://supabase
 `pg_graphql` is [open source software](https://github.com/supabase/pg_graphql/). As always, Issues and PRs are welcome.
 
 
-[Try `pg_graphql`](https://supabase.github.io/pg_graphql/quickstart/) today to see a live [GraphiQL](https://graphql-dotnet.github.io/docs/getting-started/graphiql/) demo.
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+[Try `pg_graphql`](https://supabase.github.io/pg_graphql/quickstart/) today to see a live [GraphiQL](https://graphql-dotnet.github.io/docs/getting-started/graphiql/) demo.